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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D80
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Date Taken:Jul 3, 2009, 2:57:31 PM

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Delicate Efflorescenceby ~MeticulousMariya

Photography / People & Portraits / Classic Portraits

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Model - Devynne - www.modelmayhem.com/1171529
Stylings - Devynne and myself.
MUA/hair/photo - me.

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Critique by ~farcry77 Sep 24, 2009, 12:39:09 AM

First of all I must say I have very little experience shooting portraits and working with models and props. I write this solely as a viewer and a admired of others work. So let me begin.
I like how most of the things work very well on this shot. The colors are good and the composition + the focus. Technically they are very important to bring up an good shot. And the other is the lights. Lights works good in most place of this shot as well. However I would like to see more lights and contrasts on the models face. Maybe surrounding the eyes which will bring more life to the whole scene and brings out the models beauty and more detail in the makeup as well. Other than that I don’t see any adjustment is required to the lights.

Furthermore I like the way you have used the props,jewellery and the background to create this scene. She looks like a lonely princess in her huge garden with a broken heart. I don’t know if that’s the message you try to convey. If not ooopps sorry

Good work over all. Keep it up.

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*FrancoisDeWynter Sep 4, 2010

very nice

~taki1 Jan 22, 2010

Hate typography on the photos but... BEAUTIFUL shot.

~MeticulousMariya Jan 22, 2010 Student Traditional Artist

_{what can I say, these days people have to have their signatures/watermarks on their works to protect them from various theft}

*Abanna Dec 20, 2009 Hobbyist Photographer

_{Beautiful shot!}

~MeticulousMariya Dec 20, 2009 Student Traditional Artist

_{thank you}

~farcry77 Oct 15, 2009 Hobbyist Photographer

I featured you here [link]

~MrsCullen Oct 11, 2009 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Hello

this picture has been featuted on the article here: [link]

~Dawn2 Sep 24, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Very beautiful-fairytale themed shot in every way, I love the makeup the pose the angle all look great.

Yet I feel that more shading & lighting could be used on the face to bring out the beauty of it & to make the features stand out even more, I see there's a lot of sun behind the model so a simple turn-around very simple that some of the sun beam would move upon her shoulder & to her face

also I feel that the look of the eyes is a little misplaced so an up kind of look or down to the downer right corner would be more expressive.

Beautiful photo, very atmospheric & very well done ^^

~MeticulousMariya Sep 25, 2009 Student Traditional Artist

_{thanks for the tips, will remember them next time}

~Dawn2 Sep 25, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

You're welcome

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